Comments on: How to write frugal e-mails…

By: Mrs. Micah

Mrs. Micah — Wed, 17 Oct 2007 15:04:41 +0000

Some good points, Spells, thanks. And you’re right, gracious and formal is the best way to go. Much safer, whether with business or friendship.

By: Spells

Spells — Mon, 15 Oct 2007 01:38:12 +0000

Mrs. Micah, you make a great point here — I love the link you made between financial and verbal economy. Short emails are best.

I also like your email outline and I find that I get better responses at work when I use roughly that format.

In addition, I would add:

1. Try to use the recipient’s name as the first word of the email, because people respond positively (but probably not consciously) to the sight or sound of their own name.

2. Ask clearly for what you need — in the form of a question — and put that question either in a short paragraph or set apart in its own paragraph. That helps busy business people (like my clients) home in on the key issue more easily.

I know that some older clients of mine resent the phrasing “if you would do X, that would be great”. . .it’s something about the “that would be great” phrase itself. They respond much more happily when I say “Would you please do X?”

3. Close with an offer to help, like “Please let me know if you have any questions, or if I can help you in any way. Thank you so much for helping me with this.”

4. Always be more polite than you think is necessary. I have never lost by being gracious and a bit formal (and I follow these email “rules” even with people I know very well); but I definitely have hurt myself by being casual or joke-y in emails.

Anyway, great post — thanks for starting the discussion.

By: GreenPanda

GreenPanda — Sun, 14 Oct 2007 13:32:40 +0000

My company needs you to come in and teach this. I keep getting pointless and long emails.

By: frugal zeitgeist

frugal zeitgeist — Sat, 13 Oct 2007 23:51:37 +0000

I’ve been trying to get this through the head of one of my staff members for >1 year now. He has finally learned that I don’t want to read long emails, but now he’s substituting quantity for length.

Sigh.

By: Andrew Stevens

Andrew Stevens — Sat, 13 Oct 2007 23:30:04 +0000

Great post. I’ll have to keep that in mind next time I’m sending a work-related email. I’ve always known that my biggest problem is a tendency to be long-winded. Sadly, clarity and concision are often competing goals. It’s always nice when they’re not.

By: mrsmicah

mrsmicah — Sat, 13 Oct 2007 14:49:24 +0000

@FB You’re right, sometimes e-mails can’t be that short. I’d say 90% of mine can be. If not, then the short summary + detail below method is a good one. I do that as well.

@Jon Lol, are you sure you’re not my mother or weren’t raised by her? Just because she’d often read us Greek stories as kids, so we know about Demosthenes and whatnot. I run into very few people who actually know these stories (I don’t think I learned that one myself).

By: Jon

Jon — Sat, 13 Oct 2007 14:42:02 +0000

This reminds me of a story about the Spartans, which I found extremely funny:

When the banished Samians reached Sparta, they had audience of the magistrates, before whom they made a long speech, as was natural with persons greatly in want of aid. Accordingly at this first sitting the Spartans answered them that they had forgotten the first half of their speech, and could make nothing of the remainder.

Afterwards the Samians had another audience, whereat they simply said, showing a bag which they had brought with them, “The bag wants flour.” The Spartans answered that they did not need to have said “the bag”; however, they resolved to give them aid.

By: Fabulously Broke

Fabulously Broke — Sat, 13 Oct 2007 11:02:11 +0000

Yes, it’s clear and concise using your method. But what I normally do when I have a lot of tests that I need to write a lot of info for (to cover my butt basically.. ) I do a short summary at the top “Everything A-OK” or “2 issues”, then I go into detail with pictures/images in the rest of the email….

But I see what you mean about frugality. I’m trying to do it myself… but it’s hard.